The worst day
The worst day of the life looks like: when you wake up late. When you want to eat breakfast but it's not there. When you try to talk about breakfast with your mother, she scold you. You'll think that this is the end but no. When you are going to school, you're late and get beaten by teacher. You'll think what a day! When you take out your notebooks you saw you haven't completed your homework, then the teacher throw you out of the class. After this no-one talks with you. Now you're ALONE. And totally sad, what could you do? The answer is nothing you could do, but you can believe on your self! This would be the worst day of the life. When no one is with you and you're alone but at that moment don't lose anything and always have faith and believe yourself for the good!
Great writing, as always.
ReplyDeleteI loved:
1. The flow of your blog, how it started from everything just going haywire to looking for the silver lining.
What I think would have made it greater:
1. The title - instead of a negative one, you could have used an optimistic one like "Believe.. in yourself", "Have faith", "the silver lining". In short, use a catchy one.
2. Seperate the paragraph where you figure out all's well!
Keep pushing yourself, keep blogging!
Okay thanks bhaiya
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